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Finance
Banking-Inv.
Sponsored
Penn-Wharton
MBA
“In a Business School application package, the most important component is the essay.” Any admissions officer at a business school would say the same. Unlike test preparation for exams such as the GMAT or TOEFL, the amount of time spent on essay writing does not necessarily correlate with the quality of the final output. Precisely for this reason, I strongly recommend beginning preparation early and engaging a consultant who can serve as a clear guide and effective pace-maker to help you proceed efficiently and strategically.
I was notified in early February that I had passed my company’s internal screening for corporate sponsorship. From that point, I immediately began focusing on score-making, but it was not until August that I finally achieved scores competitive enough to apply. I met Mr. Stephen Round in Tokyo in May, and Stephen himself agreed to take charge of my essay counseling. However, having decided on my own that “scores come first,” I did not begin working on my resume or the foundational elements—such as refining my core “Why MBA”—until late July. With first-round deadlines in late September to early October, the preparation period of less than two months was extremely tight. In fact, without Stephen’s highly efficient counseling, it would have been impossible for me to apply to even two schools. Under Stephen’s effective guidance, I was able to thoroughly and efficiently complete, without waste, the identification of past experiences and achievements that formed the basis of my resume, the refinement of my career goals, and the development of a coherent “Why MBA” that tied everything together—just enough to submit applications to two schools.
Immediately after the first-round deadlines, I began working on essays for three dream schools for the second round. At that point, I started to worry that the “Why MBA” I had prepared for the first round lacked sufficient depth. Because I became overly fixated on the content, I found myself trapped in unproductive thinking. During this period, Stephen listened to my concerns with great care and offered a wide range of advice on how to turn my essays into a compelling narrative. At the same time, he strictly fulfilled his role as a pace-maker, giving me firm and encouraging advice to decisively let go of aspects that did not offer sufficient return in terms of cost (time) versus impact.
As stated at the outset, essays—the most critical element of a business school application—often involve many hours that do not directly translate into results. That is precisely why it is essential to start early and work on them gradually. This is an unavoidable process, and in the end, there is no alternative but to extract and shape your own story. My failure in the business school application process was that I did not begin essay preparation until after finishing score-making. Even so, the reason I was ultimately able to secure admission to a top-ranked business school was solely because Stephen, a truly professional counselor, provided me with thoughtful and effective advice when I struggled, and acted as a steady pace-maker whenever I became discouraged or pessimistic. Essay writing is never a process that can be outsourced entirely to a counselor, but having a counselor who will walk the long journey alongside you as a true partner will undoubtedly make the path more efficient and effective.